#67
Title:
Charlie Bone and the Beast (Children of the Red King #6)
Author: Jenny Nimmo
Publisher: Orchard Books
Year: 2007
Genre: Children's/young adult, fantasy/science fiction, disappointing
399 pages
One
might ask why I keep reading this series when I find them so
disappointing. I suppose that it is a combination of hope and morbid
fascination. I keep thinking that Nimmo might do a better job, that her
skills at style and plot might develop. Though they don't (the first
book in this series was the best), I keep coming back out of a sad
astonishment that these books are intended for 9 to 12-year olds, the
same range as
Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. While Rowling has her own writing difficulties at times, they pale beside the issues that plague Nimmo's books.
Charlie Bone and the Beast is
perhaps the worst yet in this series; not only does the plot not cohere
well, but it lacks resolution, clearly serving as part 1 of at least a
2-part story arc. Though the characters are growing older, they
demonstrate no psychological or emotional development. That several of
them are now dating is perhaps intended to show them maturing, but it is
depicted in a very flat and uncomplex way.
Dagbert, the latest
in a string of new characters, poses an extreme threat to Charie's
parents and to Cook, as well as to his own father. His father is also a
threat to Charlie's parents , Cook, and Dagbert. He appears to have
dropped Dagbert at Bloor's in order to control or contain him. Where
does any of this go? Absolutely nowhere. Yes, Dagbert presents some
threats to Charlie, all of which are easily repulsed by his friends.
Even
one of the Bloor's Academy teachers turns out to have the power to
resist Dagbert; was that Dr. Deus Ex Machina I just saw in the hallway?
Asa's family is present, then gone, serving little to no function in the
plot. Somebody is tearing up the Bones' house looking for something.
Too bad that nobody in the story can be bothered to try to find out
what. Charlie is pulled into traveling (entering into an image), ending a
chapter "with a sickening sense of dread...realiz[ing] that...[h]e'd
left behind the only thing that could take him back--his white moth" (p.
307), which is really his transformed wand, but as it happens, 4
paragraphs later, he
does return--no explanation given. Billy
worries about a padlock. Simple solution: Pick it up and hide it or take
it with you. No such luck; these middle school-aged children are too
dense to think of anything so clever. But it doesn't matter anyway--one
of Charlie's friends gets the key from one of his enemies. There's also
unresolved business about a will.
I find myself in the strange
position of waiting for Book 7 simply to see if all of Book 6 is a
set-up for the resolution of these issues, or whether, as in some of
Orson Scott Card's worse series, the plot will simply vanish all
together.
